Art and Experience: At this year’s Sun Valley Film Festival, writer-directors Oliver Stone (“Snowden”) and Mark Duplass (“Togetherness”), screenwriter David Seidler (“The King’s Speech”) and producer Cassian Elwes (“Dallas Buyers Club”) offered blunt advice to screenwriters and independent filmmakers based on their years of experience in the industry. Indie wire collected the seven juiciest tips:
1. The end comes before the beginning.
Francis Ford Coppola, as told to David Seidler: Don’t start a script until you know the end, or at least what your penultimate, big movie moment is at the end that pulls the whole thing together. You need to know your destination before you set out on your trip, because then you know which roads to take. The same thing with the script itself: If you know what you’re aiming for, you can run a thin red line right through the structure of your film. Everything that progresses that thin red line is useful, and everything — no matter how beautifully written, how funny, how moving — if it doesn’t meet that thin red line, you have to cut it.
2. Know when to step back.
Oliver Stone: My advice is, try not to get over-involved in the script beyond a certain point. Set a limit for yourself. Get the idea out, at least in a treatment form, because treatments can excite the imagination of the buyer, but going to a full screenplay, and going all out on it, can be a huge downer [if the project stalls].
3. “Tribe Up.”
Mark Duplass: I didn’t have any connections or any way of getting into the film business other than me and my brother making dorky short films with our parents’ video camera. Eventually we made a small movie that got into Sundance, and we just felt so overwhelmed with how to navigate that world that we started clustering our friends around us… Part of it, for me, is knowing that I’m going to be surrounded by people who are willing to check my ego at the door, and part of it is also that we just really fucking like each other. Life is short, and making independent films and TV is really hard. I’ve been doing this for 10 or 12 years now, and you start to realize the process is almost as important as the product. We like working with people over and over again, and feeling the strength in numbers.
4. Earn a living, but not by writing.
David Seidler: A trust fund is a valuable writing tool, but if you do have to earn a living, try not to do it by using up your writing energy. Avoid at all costs working in advertising, journalism, teaching, reading other people’s dreadful scripts. You only have so much creative energy in your soul each day, and if you use it up earning a living, when you get home and say, “Right, after dinner, I’m going to do my two hours on my script,” you’re not going to work two hours on your script. You’re going to watch television and drink a beer. Learn a craft. Become a plumber. Make a shoe. You’ll be so bored doing it, you’ll go the extra mile to get your writing done and become successful.
5. Start small to find your “Special Sauce.”
Mark Duplass: I can only speak from my own experience, but I guess the road I tend to recommend continually, the good thing about it is, it doesn’t require anything other than a shit-ton of hard work, your own ingenuity, your own absolute refusal to give up and a nice dose of desperation… My brother and I tried to go out and make the Great American Feature when we were in our early- to mid-twenties. We used to run an editing business, and we saved up like $60,000 and we went and shot a movie called “Vince del Rio,” which was a very poignant, dramatic story about a runner from the South Texas border, played by me. We didn’t know much about the subject matter. We wanted to make a movie that felt like “Rocky.” We didn’t know what we were doing, and we paid for it out of pocket, and it was a steaming pile of dog poo. We realized that quickly after editing, and it killed us. It took us about a year and a half to two years to recover from that.
I don’t want to see that happen to other people. You might be able to go out and make your first feature and have your vision down. Most people don’t. I definitely didn’t. So what I recommend is the “Five-Dollar Short Program”: Use your iPhone, use iMovie, and get together your smartest friends — they don’t have to be filmmakers, they don’t have to be actors, just people who know you well, that you feel safe around, that you can fail in front of — and put together one scene that’s five minutes or less, that takes place between, ideally, three people or less. Try to shoot a scene that is derived from your life, that feels like the last conversation you had with either your sibling or best friend or loved one, and you were giggling at two in the morning about how ridiculous you felt telling a story about what happened to you. Something in there is totally where your voice is and your special sauce is. Once you make a bunch of those, you’ll probably hit on something that feels like you. Chase that.
6. Take streaming seriously.
Cassian Elwes: If people can’t get to the cinemas, they watch movies at home, on their computers, or on their iPhones. That’s not the greatest way to see films, in my opinion, but that is the way people are starting to see films now… Independent films will be the bread and butter of the online viewing experience, because those are probably the films that people aren’t going to race out and see. “Star Wars” you’re going to want to go out and see [in a cinema], but something like [Sian Heder’s] “Tallulah,” you’re going to want to see it, and if you can’t get to the cinema to see it, you’re going to want to watch it online and pay for it. That’s our business now.
7. Teach yourself to be more than a writer.
Mark Duplass: It’s really hard, and particularly hard for screenwriters, because nobody wants to read your script. It just sucks. Until you’ve made something, until you’ve proven yourself, you’re basically a nuisance to everyone that you’re trying to get your script to, so you have to find a way to make yourself valuable. I know the first response is, “Well, I’m not a director, and I’m not an actor. I’m just a writer.” And my basic response is, “Then you’re going to be stuck.” I’m sorry, if that’s the way you think about it, you’re kind of going to go nowhere. My advice is, go ahead and write the best script you can make. Your favorite script. Don’t even think about creative limits. Don’t even think about budgetary limits. Then, go write something that can absolutely be made for under $10,000, and start shooting your favorite scene from that movie. Become a director. Read a book. Figure it out. Do it over and over and over again, shoot it 30 times, until it gets good. And then, at least, you can go to a film festival with that scene and have somebody say, “So are you a director?” “No, I’m actually not a director, my main focus is writing, I directed it so I could get here. I would love for you to direct my script. Here it is.” Otherwise, you’re stuck.
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